Verbs are the main source of energy in your sentences. Weak verbs rely on adverbs for their meaning.
You can sharpen a verb by making it more precise, such as:
- Instead of look, you could use: stare, gaze, gawk, or peak
- Instead of throw, you could use: toss, pitch, hurl, or flip
Verbs should be in charge, so make them count.
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